Woe is me...I guess...this one needs some work?

Hey, This doesn't really need any thing except to change the word peruse to pursue and dodgy to stodgy.. This is an excellent free ociation poem. I love it. How old are you? I am wondering because your beautifully written piece has made some wonderful word plays. I can actually see this desolate and forlorn knight. Congratulations and please keep writing no matter what your age. You are either wise beyond your years or just an excellent writer.